Saturday 14 April 2012

The advantages & disadvantages of internet


    Internet, that's was an important and has many functions for every people in this world. Every thing in the world has it own advantages and disadvantages likewose internet. Internet is a good and simple technology that make every people in this world will use it for each of their life like work, lesson, information and other else.

   There was many advantages of internet that can be used by all people like information. Various information can be obtained by only surfing the internet that is free of charge and doesn't have any time limit. Information can be obtained not only in text form but also in picture.  Internet browsers use the search engines to get the information about what they want no matter it is used for lesson, knowledge and others.Search engines like google, search, yahoo, and others are used as a place to get information.

    Next the other advantage is abut to get the newest news in the entire world. Usage of Internet has provided the latest news that faster than the newspaper that we bought at the shop. Many newspapers have their own web sites such as 'Berita Harian', 'Kosmo' and 'The Star'. This website will be updated every day and show the latest news around the world.

    Then, the disadvantages of internet started with childrens and teenagers. In internet, there are many immoral and negative materials such as pictures and videos that are not suitable viewing by the children and teenagers. It can give a negative impact on our life. Parents should always observed what websites that opened by their children. Internet security programme must be installed on the computers used by them to block any negative materials. This will disable their childrens to access the web sites that has any immoral materials.

    As the conclusion, before surfing the internet, we must control our mind so we wolud not access any negative websites that can destroys our society. Parents also must take this responsibility for their children from access or get the ridiculous and unimportant mateials.
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  1. Anonymous15 April 2012 at 00:44

    Corrections:-

    1) There was many advantages of internet that can be used by all people like information

    There are many..use present tense ok

    2) Usage of Internet has provided .........

    The usage of Internet..just add 'the'

    3) This website will be updated every day and show the latest news around the world.

    This websites will be updated everyday which enable us to read/know the latest news around the world

    4) there are many immoral and negative materials such as pictures and videos that are not suitable viewing by the children and teenagers

    there are many negative materials such as pictures and videos that are not suitable to be viewed by the children and teenagers

    5) Parents should always observed what websites that opened by their children.

    Parents should always observe the websites opened/accessed by their children..after 'should', use root word ok

    6) This will disable their childrens to access the web sites that has any immoral materials.

    This will disable their children (no -s ok) to access the websites that have ( cz the websites, not website) any immoral materials

    7) As the conclusion, before surfing the internet, we must control our mind so we wolud not access any negative websites that can destroys our society.

    As a conclusion, before surfing the internet, we must control our mind so that we will not access to any negative websites that can destroy ( after can, use root word ok..) our society

    8) Internet, that's was an important
    Make it simple..For instance:-
    Internet is impressive and it has many functions .......

    p/s: Overall is okay..if not clear, feel free to come and see me..Thanks for the essay =)

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  2. epah23 April 2012 at 02:53

    din ! check your spelling bro ! [:

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  3. daimku28 May 2012 at 22:58

    Hello Din

    After reading your post, i find one spelling mistake
    abut,,should be about, right?

    Teacher has corrected some grammatical errors, but i think there is one error that teacher forgot to highlight
    Childrens..should be children
    This is because, 'children is the plural form for 'child'. Thus, you do not need to put 's' after 'children' because it is already in a plural form..=)

    Anyway, your post is good!

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