Huh...birthday,
all of you must remember your this important date in your life, right???when come someone birthday,we must wish to him or her 'happy birthday','HB','sanah helwah',or other else. We also celebrate that day with our friends,familly and our love person.We celebrate with joyneess and happily with them.
But did we celebrate our Prophet birthday??did we know when was our prophet birthday??if you celebrate it,what do you do on that day???
We must know when our prophet birthday.The prophet was born on 12 Rabiul-Awal 570 century,the year known as the year of the Elephant year. The year is known as Elephant year because the Abyssinian Christian ruler of Yemen, ABRAHA attacked Mecca with a herd of elephant imported from Africa. Abraha wants to destroy the Ka'ba and make the christian church at Sana' the new religious center of the Arab world. But on the sky, the flock of birds,each of the birds carrying a stone in its beak,rained down on the Abraha's army and that make them give up.
That date must being remember in our mind. So when the day is coming,we can celebrate that day. We always named that day as 'Maulud Nabi' or 'Maulidur Rasul'. We can celebrate by join the parade,so we can meet many person and can close our friendship with them.
As the conclusion,we must remember our prophet birthday and always remember him in our life.
Corrections:-
ReplyDeleteWe celebrate with joyneess and happily with them
- sentence structure
happily means 'dengan gembira'. so, when we translate, the sentence is like this 'kita menyambut dengan kseronokan dan dengan gembira dengan mereka'. Even, when we translate, the sentence sounds weird, right? so, change the sentence so that it becomes grammatically correct ok..
After i did some 'research', i did not find the word 'joyness'. .Maybe you can use an adverb 'joyfully' to replace 'joyness'.
suggestion:-
We celebrate joyfully and happily with them
joyfully and happily means 'dengan gembira'
2) The date must being remember
the correct one is the date must be remembered..
3) We can celebrate by join the parade
The correct one is we can celebrate by joining the parade..put 'ing' after 'by'..
4) We can meet many person
person is a singular noun, the plural form for person is people..since you use many in front of the word person, automatically the word person must take a plural form..and its plural form is 'people'
5) as the conclusion
"As a conclusion" is accurate..
p/s: Remember the basic grammatical rules ok..Good luck for next writing =)